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Post by Mr P J Lee on Jun 10, 2009 20:45:54 GMT 1
Remember your #2 draft of the Causes of the Civil War essay has been set today.
It is due in Wed 17th June [ remember I'm not going to be here next Monday and Tuesday as I'm in Peterboro exam marking ]
;D
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 10, 2009 20:50:48 GMT 1
lots of marking for you lol. i've started my intro spent 30mins on it because i drafted it again.
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Post by Kimmmmm; on Jun 11, 2009 13:07:43 GMT 1
Im glad we have more time to write it out, ¬¬ *glare* Last time just was not enough, 3 days pha. no where near as much to be certain
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 11, 2009 13:09:31 GMT 1
yep not alot of time. I think we would all get higer levels this time (hopefully)
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Post by Kimmmmm; on Jun 11, 2009 13:11:51 GMT 1
yeah, i got 6A for my 1st draft this time and hopefullyi can get into the level 7's, because the first draft we ever did i got 6B, ahahah (:
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 11, 2009 16:26:54 GMT 1
i got 5A 1st draft
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Post by Dodo Gravy Gecko on Jun 11, 2009 16:37:30 GMT 1
I got a 5b- how crap
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 11, 2009 16:41:08 GMT 1
lol i have to get a LEVLEL 7
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Post by ToSLegends on Jun 11, 2009 17:01:31 GMT 1
Sir can you e-mail me my feedback since it was on the pc and I don't know what to improve on.
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 11, 2009 19:04:43 GMT 1
didn't he explain in class?? use your mark scheme to help you improve add in the things you've missed
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Post by ToSLegends on Jun 11, 2009 19:30:01 GMT 1
No because he marked mine on the computer and didn't tick my mark scheme for it... =/
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Post by Mr P J Lee on Jun 11, 2009 19:33:22 GMT 1
No because he marked mine on the computer and didn't tick my mark scheme for it... =/ I did a mark scheme - and it was in the pile with all the essays to be given back.
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Post by ToSLegends on Jun 11, 2009 19:36:30 GMT 1
Ehh I'll try checking the pile tomorrow.
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Post by DemonGod(abdul) on Jun 11, 2009 20:06:31 GMT 1
lol its the perosn who handed them out its their fault
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Post by ToSLegends on Jun 13, 2009 23:30:33 GMT 1
Sir do you think you can get my feedback for my 1st draft anytime tonight or tomorrow morning?
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